Hi, this is my persuasive writing that I did last term.We got to choose from 3 topics and I chose this one because, I get really excited when it's my birthday because, you get a cake presents family coming over and you get the birthday feeling. Do you get excited when it's your birthday? It was really fun writing this piece of writing because I like birthdays. I think I did really well with separating the paragraphs into sections. Please tell me in the comments if you think that there is anything that I could change or improve on. 👍
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