Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 1, 2020
Elephants
Hi this is my slide about Elephants. We had to do a report on an animal so
I chose Elephants because they are interesting and I learnt a lot about them
in Auckland Zoo. This was a really fun topic for me and I really enjoyed it.
Do you have fun writing reports?
Hope you like it :)
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Great work Kaia! I really like elephants too. I saw some in the wild when I visited South Africa. It was great, one even came right up to our car which I got worried about as they could do a fair bit of damage. I didn't realise they spent 80% of there time eating. This was a great fact to start with as it caught my attention.
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ReplyDeleteElephants are fascinating creatures aren't they? You included so many interesting facts and colourful slides. I didn't know that they spend 80 percent of their day eating! Thats what lots of us have done in lockdown too!!! It's so incredibly sad that so many beautiful creatures get poached. Great job!
Hi Kaia, this is a top quality presentation. I like the design and the information is clear and easy to understand. I also loved how you added the personal touch at the end. It's so sad so many are being poached. I got to go to an elephant sanctuary in Africa when I was travelling and got to see how people are keeping young safe from harm. Keep up the great writing!
ReplyDeleteHi Kaia, I really like your work it was very interesting! The way you put it into the slide was fantastic! I like all of the pictures you put in the made it more easy to read. It was very cool how you put pictures of you with Elephants.
ReplyDeleteHi Kaia I really like your work. I really like your info about elephants. I had no idea that lions were elephant enemies. I really like your work!! :D
ReplyDeleteHi Kaia Its me Tyler I really liked the way you added your personal encounters with elephants, It would also be good if you added videos, I also like elephants.
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