Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 17, 2020
Fun fictional story about my Dad!
Hi, this is my slide of a great, fun fictional story about my Dad.
I struggled to come up with an idea of what to do it about but when I got it
I had lots of fun writing it. What type of stuff do you have fun writing about?
I hope you like it :)
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Hi Kaia, what an interesting idea. I have enjoyed reading these stories about people's parents. I really like how you've used speech marks for when someone is talking. It would be great to see a bit more drama in the story, maybe something bad could have happened to Lukie and you dad needed to solve the problem.
ReplyDeleteWOW what an amazing story
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