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Friday, April 17, 2020

Fun fictional story about my Dad!



Hi, this is my slide of a great, fun fictional story about my Dad.
I struggled to come up with an idea of what to do it about but when I got it
I had lots of fun writing it. What type of stuff do you have fun writing about?
I hope you like it :)

2 comments:

  1. Hi Kaia, what an interesting idea. I have enjoyed reading these stories about people's parents. I really like how you've used speech marks for when someone is talking. It would be great to see a bit more drama in the story, maybe something bad could have happened to Lukie and you dad needed to solve the problem.

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  2. WOW what an amazing story

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