Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Sunday, October 13, 2019
Cheetahs
This is my holiday homework on cheetahs.
I chose Cheetahs because they are my favourite land animal in the world.
I think Cheetahs are really cool because they are fast and really energetic.
Hope you like it!!!
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Kaia It is me Sree I really liked the way you added all the backgrounds they were really interesting.This reminded me from when I went to orana park and saw a cheetah and tried to race it.Next time you could add a longer description.But it was awesome
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ReplyDeleteI loved this because it has alot of describe. Did you think about how you could describe the cheetahs better. How come you decided to do it on this topic. Was this your first time doing a holiday homework?
Kia Ora Kaia it is me Tayla I really liked your cheetahs slide because you put in a lot of facts about cheetahs that I did not know about. Maybe next time you could either not have a end slide with no writing or put something on it.
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